I wanted to preface this by mentioning exactly how smoothly this game is run, and that I think you guys are doing a fantastic job.
One thing I have noticed though is a lot of lag on updating things, specifically reserves. Some characters were in the game for weeks before the reserves were updated to reflect that they'd been accepted, where other reserves were left up on the page 2+ weeks after they expired. There are also a fair amount of links in the files on the
soul_mods journal that lead to posts that players are unauthorized to view. It makes it difficult to keep track of things.
One thing I have noticed though is a lot of lag on updating things, specifically reserves. Some characters were in the game for weeks before the reserves were updated to reflect that they'd been accepted, where other reserves were left up on the page 2+ weeks after they expired. There are also a fair amount of links in the files on the
Character Name: Prussia
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Journal:
seizeyoursouls
Character Name: Nanako Dojima
Fandom: Persona 4
Journal:
junesplz
Character Name: Shalnark
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter
Journal:
shalnark
Character Name: Patti Thompson (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
thebiggergun
Character Name: Azusa Yumi (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
snipingyourfail
Character Name: Angela (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
onewitchsoul
I'm not including Medusa since her appearance isn't required just yet thus has been inactive. However, I'll take advice if you have any!
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Journal:
Character Name: Nanako Dojima
Fandom: Persona 4
Journal:
Character Name: Shalnark
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter
Journal:
Character Name: Patti Thompson (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
Character Name: Azusa Yumi (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
Character Name: Angela (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
I'm not including Medusa since her appearance isn't required just yet thus has been inactive. However, I'll take advice if you have any!
Character Name:Lacus Clyne
Fandom: Mobile Suit Gundam Seed
Journal:
singstheprayer
Character Name: Hiruko
Fandom: Nightmare Inspector
Journal:
yumekui_kenbun
Character Name: Demon Lord Raenef the Vth
Fandom: Demon Diary
Journal:
mock_me_vermin
Fandom: Mobile Suit Gundam Seed
Journal:
Character Name: Hiruko
Fandom: Nightmare Inspector
Journal:
Character Name: Demon Lord Raenef the Vth
Fandom: Demon Diary
Journal:
Character Name: Neku Sakuraba
Fandom: The World Ends With You
Journal:
gotphones
Character Name: Namine
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Journal:
fromthewaves
Character Name: Lightning Farron
Fandom: Final Fantasy XIII
Journal:
lightingtruth
Character Name: Kaworu Nagisa
Fandom: Neon Genesis Evangelion: Gakuen Datenroku
Journal:
forgetspajamas
Fandom: The World Ends With You
Journal:
Character Name: Namine
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Journal:
Character Name: Lightning Farron
Fandom: Final Fantasy XIII
Journal:
Character Name: Kaworu Nagisa
Fandom: Neon Genesis Evangelion: Gakuen Datenroku
Journal:
Character Name: Heine Rammsteiner
Fandom: DOGS:Bullets & Carnage
Journal:
bulletcarnage
Character Name: Allen Walker
Fandom: D.Gray-man
Journal:
antiakuma
Fandom: DOGS:Bullets & Carnage
Journal:
Character Name: Allen Walker
Fandom: D.Gray-man
Journal:
Character Name: Kurapika
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter
Journal:
ih8spiders
Also uuh I was the one who handled Azusa Yumi in the last intro log. I dived into it without any canon review whatsoever so I was kind of iffy with her. ;;; Depending on how things go, I might end up taking over for her entirely, so it'd be great if I could get feedback for her? If you threaded with her there and want to tell me anything, that is. Even if it's "you suck go read the manga first". :'Db The actual HMD comment for Azusa is with Celi here. Thank you!
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter
Journal:
Also uuh I was the one who handled Azusa Yumi in the last intro log. I dived into it without any canon review whatsoever so I was kind of iffy with her. ;;; Depending on how things go, I might end up taking over for her entirely, so it'd be great if I could get feedback for her? If you threaded with her there and want to tell me anything, that is. Even if it's "you suck go read the manga first". :'Db The actual HMD comment for Azusa is with Celi here. Thank you!
Edited 2010-07-01 11:47 (UTC)
Character Name: England (Arthur Kirkland)
Fandom: Hetalia
Journal:
notexcalibur
Character Name: North Italy (Feliciano Vargas)
Fandom: Hetalia
Journal:
miarrendo
Character Name: Shaymin
Fandom: Pokémon
Journal:
flowercarrying
Character Name: Blair (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
blackmagicpussy
Fandom: Hetalia
Journal:
Character Name: North Italy (Feliciano Vargas)
Fandom: Hetalia
Journal:
Character Name: Shaymin
Fandom: Pokémon
Journal:
Character Name: Blair (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
Character Name: Kanda Yuu
Fandom: D. Gray-man
Journal:
kandescence
Character Name: Badou Nails
Fandom: DOGS
Journal:
smokeeasy
Stiiiill technically on hiatus for fail net. Apologies again for all the slow that (and various RL woes) has made for this month. But the net issue, at least, should be resolved within the next few days. /crosses fingers
Fandom: D. Gray-man
Journal:
Character Name: Badou Nails
Fandom: DOGS
Journal:
Stiiiill technically on hiatus for fail net. Apologies again for all the slow that (and various RL woes) has made for this month. But the net issue, at least, should be resolved within the next few days. /crosses fingers
Character Name: Sephiroth
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Journal:
pure_lineage
Character Name: Shibuya Yuuri
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Journal:
a_r0yal_flush
Character Name: Sohki
Fandom: Genju no Seiza
Journal:
holy_prankster
Character Name: Tassadar
Fandom: Starcraft
Journal:
aiursfavoredson
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Journal:
Character Name: Shibuya Yuuri
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Journal:
Character Name: Sohki
Fandom: Genju no Seiza
Journal:
Character Name: Tassadar
Fandom: Starcraft
Journal:
Character Name: Rise Kujikawa
Fandom: Persona 4
Journal:
forthecamera
Character Name: Winry Rockbell
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Journal:
endthiscycle
Character Name: Fa Mulan (Ping)
Fandom: Disney's Mulan
Journal:
thethirdhare
Character Name: Liz Thompson (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
thesmallergun
Character Name: Eruka Frog (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
thespazzyfrog
Fandom: Persona 4
Journal:
Character Name: Winry Rockbell
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Journal:
Character Name: Fa Mulan (Ping)
Fandom: Disney's Mulan
Journal:
Character Name: Liz Thompson (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
Character Name: Eruka Frog (NPC)
Fandom: Soul Eater
Journal:
Character Name: Soul
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
pianoman_soul
Character Name: Excalibro
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
excali_fornia
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
Character Name: Excalibro
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
Edited 2010-07-01 12:57 (UTC)
I really have to applaud how well Kida is played. His voice is quite strong and I enjoy the engrish. :) I need to catch up on a few episodes but I think you have his voice.
Character Name: Cuba
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Journal:
littlestcommie
Character Name: George Washington
Fandom: John Adams
Journal:
firstinall
Character Name: Adrian Monk
Fandom: Monk
Journal:
cursedwithagift
Yes, I've been on hiatus and am creeping back from it slowly. Still, hit me if you've got anything! :D
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Journal:
Character Name: George Washington
Fandom: John Adams
Journal:
Character Name: Adrian Monk
Fandom: Monk
Journal:
Yes, I've been on hiatus and am creeping back from it slowly. Still, hit me if you've got anything! :D
Character Name: Usagi Tsukino
Fandom: Sailor Moon (manga)
Journal:
mooncalice
Character Name: Lenalee Lee
Fandom: D. Gray-man
Journal:
awesomeboots
Character Name: Günter von Kleist
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Journal:
heikaaaa
Fandom: Sailor Moon (manga)
Journal:
Character Name: Lenalee Lee
Fandom: D. Gray-man
Journal:
Character Name: Günter von Kleist
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Journal:
... Please remember to tag your comments. >: You always forget to do that.
Character Name: Superbi Squalo
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Journal:
requiem_no_ame
Character Name: Hades
Fandom: Disney's Hercules
Journal:
furnace_head
Character Name: Izaya Orihara
Fandom: DRRR!!
Journal:
loves_humanity
Character Name: Mitsukuni Haninozuka
Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Journal:
low_sugar_bunny
Character Name: Constance Hardbroom
Fandom: The Worst Witch
Journal:
needs_no_wand
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Journal:
Character Name: Hades
Fandom: Disney's Hercules
Journal:
Character Name: Izaya Orihara
Fandom: DRRR!!
Journal:
Character Name: Mitsukuni Haninozuka
Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Journal:
Character Name: Constance Hardbroom
Fandom: The Worst Witch
Journal:
Character Name: Sakura Kinomoto
Fandom: Cardcaptor Sakura
Journal:
rosy_wings
Character Name: Arashi Kishuu
Fandom: X/1999
Journal:
storm_of_ise
Character Name: Oruha
Fandom: Clover
Journal:
marked_songbird
I know I've been spotty with tagging back a lot, but I'm trying to kick that problem with mixed results. /o\
Also, I'd really love for concrit, especially on Sakura. I feel like I've been playing her in a way that comes out as flat lately, so I'd appreciate any and all comments or advice.
Fandom: Cardcaptor Sakura
Journal:
Character Name: Arashi Kishuu
Fandom: X/1999
Journal:
Character Name: Oruha
Fandom: Clover
Journal:
I know I've been spotty with tagging back a lot, but I'm trying to kick that problem with mixed results. /o\
Also, I'd really love for concrit, especially on Sakura. I feel like I've been playing her in a way that comes out as flat lately, so I'd appreciate any and all comments or advice.
You've got Arashi's elegance down, along with her strength. I think what I need to see more of, though, are the secretly pleasant or flaily sides of her personality. She seems a little too flat, whereas her original in the actual series is more multi-dimensional.
Character Name: Germany
Fandom: Hetalia
Journal:
thebestandwurst
Character Name: Kuroro Lucifer
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter
Journal:
alphaspider
Character Name: John Watson
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes
Journal:
stalwartcane
Character Name: Spirit Albarn aka Deathscythe
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
daddyscythe
Character Name: Mifune
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
ninetyninesouls
Sorry my activity has been really suffering lately. RL has been whacked since June started.
Fandom: Hetalia
Journal:
Character Name: Kuroro Lucifer
Fandom: Hunter x Hunter
Journal:
Character Name: John Watson
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes
Journal:
Character Name: Spirit Albarn aka Deathscythe
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
Character Name: Mifune
Fandom: Soul Eater (NPC)
Journal:
Sorry my activity has been really suffering lately. RL has been whacked since June started.
Character Name: Raidou Kuzunoha
Fandom: Devil Summoner
Journal:
justtubeit
Character Name: Laura Kinney
Fandom: Marvel Comics
Journal:
kidkittyclaws
Character Name: Rokudo Mukuro
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Journal:
karmafree
Character Name: Roy Mustang
Fandom: Full Metal Alchemist (Season 1)
Journal:
thewarisover
Character Name: Axel
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Journal:
pyroporcupine
Fandom: Devil Summoner
Journal:
Character Name: Laura Kinney
Fandom: Marvel Comics
Journal:
Character Name: Rokudo Mukuro
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Journal:
Character Name: Roy Mustang
Fandom: Full Metal Alchemist (Season 1)
Journal:
Character Name: Axel
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Journal:
While on the whole I do think your voices for Roy and Axel (the only two I know the canons for) are good, I feel that I want to bring a couple of things to you generally.
First, while you are clearly willing to tag back forever, and that's very awesome, I have found on several occasions even when you bring your characters to mine I am the one who is doing a lot of work to find things to keep the threads going. I have noticed a trend in which after a few opening comments your characters start to give responses that are conversation enders, not conversation maintainers or organic CR builders. I have also found that when I do spend time thinking up topics for my character/s to bring up to continue the thread with yours that I am then met with another conversation ender in response. This gives off the impression to me--even if this isn't the case--that you want CR not through mutual work and development, but instead to be brought to you by the other player putting in the work in your stead. It’s a real shame because I genuinely do enjoy what we have been doing with Allen and Roy especially, but even those threads have sometimes left me feeling very drained from needing to keep the thread afloat.
Secondly, I think you may need to double-check you IC knowledge in relation to your OOC knowledge. I am seeing a few places that I think there is some bleeding between the lines going on (i.e, Roy’s notes seem to know more about some characters than he realistically should know and Mukuro, for example, I think has hones in on ‘secret creeper types’ with little to no reason for him to suspect them first.)
Perhaps related to this, one issue that I’ve noticed crop up several times is that your characters’ intelligence seems to get hand-waved in game rather than appearing through their interactions; their smartness really needs to not be hand-waved otherwise you may risk starting to come across as godmod-y, which I know is not your intention at all XD;;
First, while you are clearly willing to tag back forever, and that's very awesome, I have found on several occasions even when you bring your characters to mine I am the one who is doing a lot of work to find things to keep the threads going. I have noticed a trend in which after a few opening comments your characters start to give responses that are conversation enders, not conversation maintainers or organic CR builders. I have also found that when I do spend time thinking up topics for my character/s to bring up to continue the thread with yours that I am then met with another conversation ender in response. This gives off the impression to me--even if this isn't the case--that you want CR not through mutual work and development, but instead to be brought to you by the other player putting in the work in your stead. It’s a real shame because I genuinely do enjoy what we have been doing with Allen and Roy especially, but even those threads have sometimes left me feeling very drained from needing to keep the thread afloat.
Secondly, I think you may need to double-check you IC knowledge in relation to your OOC knowledge. I am seeing a few places that I think there is some bleeding between the lines going on (i.e, Roy’s notes seem to know more about some characters than he realistically should know and Mukuro, for example, I think has hones in on ‘secret creeper types’ with little to no reason for him to suspect them first.)
Perhaps related to this, one issue that I’ve noticed crop up several times is that your characters’ intelligence seems to get hand-waved in game rather than appearing through their interactions; their smartness really needs to not be hand-waved otherwise you may risk starting to come across as godmod-y, which I know is not your intention at all XD;;

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