Oh, I wouldn’t call it your bad as long as you and the mods who approved it get what is meant, but as a sample it is… Too well-phrased? You have a wonderful way with words and it might be because English is my second language, but even though I checked out Jade’s Weapon abilities before and thus should know what is being said but I still don’t get it. As far as I can understand the part shown as a sample covers the HOW it works but I keep missing the details that explain WHAT the ability/attack that is being spoken of actually is besides vague terms of manipulating energy that is taken from the environment.
My best guess so far is still that it has to be some kind of Captain Planet Soul Menace, I'm very sorry about that. ^^;

Under normal circumstances I wouldn’t think twice about it and just shrug it off as me failing to translate something in a coherent way and ask you personally should the need for knowing it arise, so this is nothing personal, it really isn’t. I enjoy interacting with you both on an IC and OOC level and I feel bad if it comes off as me trying to call you out because I really don’t. What I want to try to do is to give feedback to the changes and new app form.

My point still stands, though, examples are meant to be understood easily by everybody and – call me the idiot I might be – I don’t feel that the first example does fulfill that requirement. :(